外研必修2同步写作专题讲座6个(3)

Traditional Chinese painting styles are closer to reality and easier to understand while most western modern paintings are too difficult to be understood. Besides, there are many famous traditional Chinese painters, one of whom is Qi Baishi. His paintings of little shrimps are popular among many people.Another China's best­known artist, Xu Beihong, also followed the traditional Chinese style.He is famous for his lively paintings of horses, which look so lively.What's more, an important feature of traditional Chinese paintings is the perfect coordination of pictures, poems, calligraphy and seals.These also add beauty to the paintings.
So most people like traditional Chinese paintings.
外研版SB2 MODULE 5
如何写新闻报道
 

1．分清新闻报道的结构
(1)标题：标题是新闻的题目，是对最有新闻价值内容的浓缩、概括、提炼和再创造。
(2)导语：导语是新闻开头的第一段或第一句，它简明扼要地揭示出新闻的核心内容。
(3)主体：主体是新闻的主要部分，是对导语内容的进一步阐释。
(4)结语：新闻报道的结语一般是最后一句或者一段，通常对全文内容作概括性的总结。一般来说，标题、导语和主体是构成新闻报道的必不可少的三部分。结语则可根据新闻报道的内容而决定它的取舍。
2．搜集新闻素材，选准报道的主题。并不是所有过去或最近发生的事件都是新闻的写作对象。新闻的主题必须能引起大家的兴趣和注意，具有一定的社会价值。
3．明确文体特点。即真实性、实效性、思想性和简明性。
4．抓住写作要素。从某种角度上讲，新闻属于记叙文的范畴，因此一篇新闻的写作要素主要包括“5个W”和“一个H”，即“when，where，who，what，why”和“how”。
5．锤炼新闻导语。导语置于新闻的开头，是吸引读者的重要手段和展示作者才华的窗口。提供消息、简短、直截了当、生动、客观和富于色彩是优秀导语的基本特点。

1．提出问题
①In recent years/Recently, we have to face a problem that ...
②These days, the problem that ...has always been puzzling us.
2．解决问题
①With the development of modern technology, we now have many means to solve it.
②By doing ...we can ...successfully.
③It is the most important that .../What is the most important is that .../That ...is considered to be the most important.
3．得出结论
It is clear (obvious) that .../In a word .../Only when ...can we ...

[题目要求]
请你根据下面的提示写一篇新闻报道。
1．中国宇航员翟志刚走出神舟7号轨道仓，进入太空的时候，所有的人都非常高兴。
2．翟志刚成为中国第一个太空行走的人。他进行了20分钟太空行走，他身穿中国制造的飞天宇航服。
3．神舟7号在星期四晚间从甘肃省发射升空，星期天在内蒙古地区着陆。
4．中国官方媒体报告说，中国的最终目标是建造一个永久的空间实验室和一个大型太空工程系统。
注意：1.字数：120～150；
2．可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
[三步作文法]
第一步：搜索词汇
1．宇航员：cosmonaut/astronaut
2．历史性的：historical
3．成就：achievement
4．宇宙飞船：spaceship
5．祝贺：congratulations
6．创立，建立：found
7．高兴的：delighted/happy
8．信念：belief
第二步：由词造句
1．一名中国宇航员为中国在外层空间迈出历史性的一步，使中国成为第三个进行太空行走的国家。
A Chinese astronaut has made the historic first step in outer space for his country, making_China_become_the_third_country that can do this.
2．翟志刚成为中国第一个太空行走的人，在这个历史性时刻向相机挥着国旗。
Zhai, who became China's first­ever spacewalker, waved the Chinese flag to the camera at this historic moment.
3. 翟志刚进行了20分钟太空行走，他身穿中国制造的飞天宇航服，这是第一套中国自制的宇航服。
For his 20 minutes' spacewalk, Zhai wore a Chinese－made Feitian suit, which is the first indigenous space suit.
第三步：连句成篇
The Historic First Step
A Chinese cosmonaut has made the historic first step in outer space for his country, making China become the third country that can do this. It is a great achievement for all the Chinese .This cosmonaut is Zhai Zhigang.
All the people became very delighted when Zhai Zhigang opened the hatch of the Shenzhou 7 spaceship and went outside. Zhai, who became China's first­ever spacewalker, waved the Chinese flag to the camera at this historic moment. For his 20 minutes' spacewalk, Zhai wore a Chinese­made Feitian suit, which is the first indigenous space suit.
Shenzhou 7 was launched on Thursday night from the western province of Gansu, and landed in the Chinese region of Inner Mongolia on Sunday. Chairman Hu sent messages of congratulations.
Chinese state media report the country's goal is to found a permanent space laboratory and a larger­scale space engineering system. And we hold the belief that our country will make greater progress in universe.
 
外研版SB2 MODULE 6
如何写影视评论
 

1．影视评论属于夹叙夹议的议论文，这种文体主要以一般现在时态介绍剧情内容及发表自己的看法。什么时候观看或电影曾获得什么奖项可用过去时态。此类文章通常采用第一、第三人称。
2．影视评论适宜用“三段式”写法：
第一段：简介背景(setting)。对电影的名称、社会影响力、导演等作简单介绍。
第二段：情节概述(main plot of the film)。包括主要演员及故事梗概。
第三段：观后感受，发表评论。可以有选择性地从不同角度对电影的主题、情节、人物形象的塑造、语言风格、演员的演技、画面特点、环境、颜色的搭配及拍摄理念的使用等方面有针对性地发表个人看法，但不要面面俱到。最后对电影总体评价。如果认为有必要，也可鼓动其他人观看。

1．It is set in the 1920s/in the sixteenth century.
2．It is based on a story/play/book by ...
3．It was directed by ...
4．The scenery is beautiful.Moreover，the background music is perfect.
5．All things considered，this is a masterpiece.

[题目要求]
请根据下列信息写一篇120～150词左右的影评。

片名	《让子弹飞》(Let the Bullets Fly)
导演	姜文
主要演员	姜文　葛优　周润发　刘嘉玲　周韵　姜武等
上映时间	目前
我的感想	•是中国最好的娱乐电影之一：
	①故事背景：上世纪三四十年代的川西 ②故事情节：…… ③演员表演：…… ④电影对白：…… •也有人说看不懂剧情，沉闷，充满暴力

 
[三步作文法]
第一步：搜索词汇
1．令人愉快的： entertaining
2．人物： character
3．以……为背景：be_set_in
4．喜剧：comedy
5．对……感兴趣：be_interested_in
6．情节：plot
7．就我而言：as_far_as_I'm_concerned
8．争论：argue
9．杰作：masterpiece
10．充满刺激的电影：thriller
第二步：由词造句
1．最近我去看了电影《让子弹飞》，它是中国最好的娱乐电影之一。